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I actually find it quite intriguing that Ponies do use their portal gun for actual travel instead of the usual pranks or shenanigans! Oh, and note to viewers, we Aperture Science are the ones inducing that thunderstorm; just another test that give rise to intriguing results!
But it seems that I fall short of it. Again... 
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I bet we all had this kind of situation when there was a heavy thunderstorm outside, great reaction with her fear of the storm. Although I find it freaky how she instantly appears under furniture after the lightning strikes at a certain time during the animation.
When she went to her friend's houses, it slightly didn't make sense because I don't think any of their houses are in their line of sight so that they could aim the portal to the houses for safe transport during storm. Even if they were in line of sight, wouldn't there be other buildings in the way?
I liked how you even did the small things like on the mailbox, the little flag on it spins constantly, even when we don't pay attention to these kind of things.
When her friends came to her house at the end, I only saw 2 of them and yet they were all missing. (Twilight makes sense from all those injuries o_O) Speaking of Twilight Sparkle, I am a little scared of what may happen in the next one because of how she appeared in this one. O.O
One thing I particularly liked was the believability of the story. Fluttershy really remains true to her character's personae in the show being a timid pony. Found the switch to the 2D Aperture Science guide to be very well done.
High Points:
1. Fluidity Of Animation - Find so many clunky flash animations and you definitely don't have this problem. Fluttershy progressing from structure/home to the next was very vivid and believable.
2. Story Component - As mentioned this is a very believable story which is what I liked to see in animations. Sometimes people just think "Hey it doesn't need a story just cool explosions/animation *glances at a certain director of a new movie*."
3. Artwork - Found it enjoyable with the artwork remaining true to the show. I'm not particularly fond of different art styles that don't mesh with a show.
Low Points -
1. Cottage To Barn Transition - This just didn't feel right to me and I understand what you are trying to do. Preferably it might have been better to do a simple still camera showing Fluttershy fall out instead of following her through it.
2. Cottage Scene *looking at the floor* - Her nose/snout appeared longer than usual. Might have been best to shorten it just a tad as it seems to change length.
Only other critical part I saw was Fluttershy Hugging Rarity where it seems her hoof pops off. This instead of partly going behind Rarity's Hair/mane to give the appearance fluttershy's hoof is connected to her body.
Keep up the good work the practice is definitely paying off with each show getting better.
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