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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:I actually find it quite intriguing that Ponies do use their portal gun for actual travel instead of the usual pranks or shenanigans! Oh, and note to viewers, we Aperture Science are the ones inducing that thunderstorm; just another test that give rise to intriguing results!

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One thing... Gave.It.My.Best... This is actually the first in which I threw almost everything that I know into the animation; all I want is just perfection... :icontwilightcrazyplz: But it seems that I fall short of it. Again... :iconepicfacepalm-plz:

This is also to test whether I'm comfortable if I am to be thrown off my comfort zone of humour and try a more serious type; in preparation of a future series that I'm planning. You guys give me the score.

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

Can't believe I've got to 6; which is the penultimate installment in the TWP series. After this, I'll have to work on something else (can't tell you, let's just say something with a certain cyan pegasus) before resuming on the final episode which will center on Twilight's revenge and some Rarity action :iconpsychotwilightclap:

Music:
Heading to War [link] , Across the Alps [link] from Eidos' Praetorians
Bombs for Throwing at you! [link] from Portal 2

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8

Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieismindfckedplz: Prank: [link]

:iconapplejacknoesplz::iconapplebloomplz::iconeeyupplz: Maintenance: [link]

:iconrainbowdashderpplz: Rainbow Highway: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]


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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Uhhh... Twilight?!?
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I think I may start into flash animations again, because now it looks like its a way to express something...
You know? I've always wathed these MLP thinking with portals, and interpreted all of 'em as funny and only comedy, but today I've found this one...deep...emotional. Really professional and most of it, original

I admire how you used to put all your efforts, knowings from animating, eerything to came out with this, truly adorable indeed, looked like it was from an original episode from the series and so, sort of it expected at the half of watching
Anyway, I admire your job, keep it up! :iconrainbowdashsaluteplz:
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Vision: I have to say this is probably your most ambitious one yet, and just now noticed you say you put everything you had into it? well after comparing this with your last one IT REALLY SHOWS! the amount of planning and figuring out how to properly convey Fluttershy wanting to be with a friend to whether out the scary storm was very well done, mostly perfect.

A 4.5 mostly because that sudden music change and Twilight home alone plotting really killed some of the real emotional tension that was built up for Fluttershy and the other two's little heart warming scene. Seriously it killed the mood a bit after you went through so much to build up to it =(

How it could of improved:

1. adding some credits between scenes. i.e. pan the camera back with a fading to black with audio doing the same.

2. Once fully pitched black you could of paused a couple, maybe 3 whole seconds and THEN do a Galdos BLINKS/opening her eyes to Twilight throwing suggestive revenge into her mind.



Originality: I like that while you follow the world of Portal and it's many features, that you don't let the basic old functions of the portal gun only working on white smooth surfaces restrict you from coming up with these great ideas, plus they eventually were trying to get it to work in how you have it working in this series anyways so let's buck that up to these portal guns being a higher calibur over the original model :P


Technique: I liked the many nuance added to this like the mailbox animations, the diving under the closet dresser and eyes poking out was really well done. The animation was really great...

...HOWEVER small points you slipped up on and, it was a very un-animated tail that looked like it really got the least amount of attention to if at all. Any amount of bounce or lift would of worked than nothing at all as she walked off her couch to open the door.

The smile '*squee*' as she noticed she was crushing the bot was cute but awkwardly animated and really reminded me that I was watching a flash animation. You SO almost had this episode! it is by far your best I've seen.

I can see that mainly squish and stretching of the mouths and bounce animation on mane/tails is all you need to really improve on!


Impact: I'm going to have to assume you couldn't visit Pinkie Pie or Twilight due to lack of properly being able to get a clear shot inside their homes. Also going to have to assume that AJ was inside her home with AB, GS, BM as she'd want to be there with her family if anything case AB (or knowing AJ) needing a pony to sleep with.

Still while it was sweet to have her two best friends by her side at the end. I was expecting the girls to think of Fluttershy being alone at home in the scary weather and want to rush over to make sure she was alright. This was just as good though and like I said it really got to me, it was a beautiful scene ^^

The fact you made me actually feel for Fluttershy's fear of thunder and being convincingly afraid to being alone during a storm and desperately wanting to be with a friend to weather it out was very touching and built up nicely as she kept trying to look for a friend. The constant disappointment of her friends not being home and being alone ended up overshadowing her fear for a while, which when you did that shifting of the camera to show her friends behind her well, longer story short, it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

So even with that Buzzkill Glados I am very well impacted by this video and loved it a great deal. This was a great change of pace and was very in character! I can't express it more <3 (I could but by the gods no one really wants to see that!)
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Aperture-Turret Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
dawww
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:iconraerae2234:
Raerae2234 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
woah!Happy Kitty, Sad Kitty Magmakitty 
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:iconroman-santos:
Roman-Santos Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
i didn't know she had a toy robot and it said" exuse me your squishing me". i really like that robot i guss that is the pony's technology (and that portal maker thing)
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:iconjuliannelapuz:
juliannelapuz Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
whats with twilight?
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:iconlucyloo9090:
lucyloo9090 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
ME LOVE THIS
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:iconpaintedheartunico:
paintedheartunico Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HOW DO YOU MAKE ANIMATIONS
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DragonTamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconclubpenguin1:
clubpenguin1 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
so awesome :)
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:iconlupine-feline:
lupine-feline Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You have created pure joy
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:iconderpystats:
derpystats Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Professional Filmographer
se han olvidado de rariti
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:iconwolfthewerehog:
Wolfthewerehog Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Oh dear
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:iconderpystats:
derpystats Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Professional Filmographer
que paso con twilight
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:iconlost-our-dreams:
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
aw cute ;3;
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:iconicetoaster:
IceToaster Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty funny
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:iconpixel-shy:
Pixel-Shy Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
funny.really funny
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kitty1234567768 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
fluttershy  if i had a portal gun i will be doing the same thing with :Portal:  so your not Sad  i also scared of thunderstorm Don't Forget Your Umbrella and will want to be with some one who not scared of a thunderstorm :tickle:  so your not the owning one who will do that Dino-mote Roar 
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alantian Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
and apple jack was never seen again
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:iconmlp-fan-123-123:
MLP-Fan-123-123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Her Hat Is The Only Thing Remembered....Unless One Of Them Sells It To Cheese Sandwich
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mylittlepony123458 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
little portal thingy: your hugging *struggle* me too tight: hahahah<br / />
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:iconkirbymaster8:
kirbymaster8 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
i never thought twilight would become GLADOS  but it makes sense now
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GamerMusicalPony789 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Its So Sad....          Oh And,Fluttershy,your mailbox is spazing
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:iconduckaloopy:
Duckaloopy Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
d'aww
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:iconpattinaggio:
Pattinaggio Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
wow 
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:iconpktcat:
pktcat Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Artist

I want a pet turret. Lucky fluttershy.

How is your day? Because I'm a potato!

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:iconriolu947:
Riolu947 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Professional Artist
What a windstorm!
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:iconpandacorn6:
Pandacorn6 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww cute till the end.. 
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DeadEyeReaper Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
:iconportalgladosplz: :iconsaysplz: At the enrichment center we believe Testing is Magic
:iconportalturretplz: :iconsaysplz: Hello!? Are you still there!?... Nap time. (everyone walks in) There you are... :icontarget:
:iconcavejohnsonplz: :iconsaysplz: Science isn't about why!! It's about Why not!!!
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:iconpixelpal1131:
PixelPal1131 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Artist
I sense a Twi "Thinking with portals"! :icontwilightplz:
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LucarioAshachulover Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Wrong Twilight, Derpy.

:iconderpymlpplz::iconsaysplz: But I like the Twilight saga! :'(

:icontwilightcrazyplz::iconsaysplz: I have the whole series at home!

:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz: That might make for an interesting test...
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:iconpixelpal1131:
PixelPal1131 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Artist
Um...
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:iconseikichan:
SeikiChan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awesome animation!
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Zoroark93 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope there is a next one coming up.
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:iconkiraonline:
KiraOnline Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw, c'mere Fluttershy. You can hang with me until the storm passes!
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:icontetrisstorm:
TetrisStorm Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
I thought Derpy Hooves is the Portal Pony?
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:iconriolu947:
Riolu947 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Professional Artist
:meow:
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redflower58 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
:iconredflower58: :iconsaysplz: it makes me cry
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:iconthepoketrix:
ThePoketrix Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OWTCH!!!
RIGHT IN THE FEELS!!!!
+fav
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DarkRoxas91 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All of my feels~
:iconfeelsplz:
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:iconjeramiahsental:
Jeramiahsental Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Okay, WHERE is the final one?!
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:iconjeramiahsental:
Jeramiahsental Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Where is the final one?!?! o.O
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:iconjeramiahsental:
Jeramiahsental Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Darn it. Ignore this one.
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:iconcloudyjw:
CloudyJW Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
aww
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yaysies Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aaaaaaaaaawwwww!
TWILIGHT YOUR FREAIN ME OUT
0.0
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:iconinvaderpucca:
InvaderPucca Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconderpynoesplz: :iconsaysplz: NUUU NOT REVENGE!
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:icondarkmagedragon:
DarkMageDragon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
WHen's the next one coming out?
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:iconsavercat:
SaverCat Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Artist
aw!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet! just not the twi-part of it............
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K1RB0 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
wow it's awesome i like
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:iconelcoron:
Elcoron Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
I simply love it!
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Art-in-heart4va Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student
:heart:
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xXHollowLittleSoulXx Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
the end really left me hanging..........
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