And thus my Aperture Science Handheld Portal Device has gone commercial in Equestria! With only 60 bits, you can have one. And it seems that Applebloom managed to get her hands on one using her spare pocket money, and still get a jar of Conversion gel too! Will she be using it for the good cause? I'm watching you Applebloom, use that thing wisely!
Twi got herself a break
. She's still in hospital trying to free herself out of that mailbox
I decided to take a leap forward by putting a minute long short. Too bad this doesn't look very good to me personally...
Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.
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Somehow I felt being something of a failure, with very little improvement going on since starting this portal series...
Can't blame it on anyone but myself, seems like the glass ceiling is a little harder than she used to be...
Enough with the ranting. We'll be playing with more colourful gels the next "thinking with portals!" By the way, if you guys have any ideas, I'm welcome to hearing it.
Wait... shall I go with Rainbow Dash on her journey home, or shall I go with Twilight whose eager for some retribution?
Music is "The Sims 3 Pets"
[link]My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve
Program used: Macromedia Flash 8
Other thinking with portals:
Postal:
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Prank:
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Rainbow Highway:
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Trust and Cooperation:
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Home Alone:
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It was great how it had a proper introduction to the situation and how it showed what the problem was before it was trying to be solved with the actual theme you put in. I read the other critiques and
But the strange thing is why did she need that jar anyway when all she needed was the portal gun? Unless I'm missing something here (I probably am) the jar was pointless. It was totally unexpected that she jumped into the portals, I thought she would put her hoof in and grab the lamp from there.
The impact of the fall was unexpected also cause Applebloom shot another portal in the progress of that fast falling which caused Applejack to be launched away. The final things are how was Luna able to use the portal with only one portal used from the portal gun and how was she able to be inside the moon considering only one portal was shot.
Regardless, it was funny and a proper intro was made and that's all that matters to me.
Apart from that the only other thing I can say is that your Ponies are a little rough around the edges in places. Apple Jack's Flank for example when she is in the moon, comes to a small point in the back instead of a rounded surface. This can be seen in small areas through out the animations, you just need to smooth out your Ponies, and give them curves consistently throughout the body line...also I think Big Mac is supposed to have freckles too..
Please Keep this series going though XD its Hilarious
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