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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:And thus my Aperture Science Handheld Portal Device has gone commercial in Equestria! With only 60 bits, you can have one. And it seems that Applebloom managed to get her hands on one using her spare pocket money, and still get a jar of Conversion gel too! Will she be using it for the good cause? I'm watching you Applebloom, use that thing wisely!

Twi got herself a break :iconcrazytwilightplz:. She's still in hospital trying to free herself out of that mailbox :XD:

I decided to take a leap forward by putting a minute long short. Too bad this doesn't look very good to me personally...

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

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Somehow I felt being something of a failure, with very little improvement going on since starting this portal series... :( Can't blame it on anyone but myself, seems like the glass ceiling is a little harder than she used to be...

Enough with the ranting. We'll be playing with more colourful gels the next "thinking with portals!" By the way, if you guys have any ideas, I'm welcome to hearing it.

Wait... shall I go with Rainbow Dash on her journey home, or shall I go with Twilight whose eager for some retribution?

Music is "The Sims 3 Pets" [link]


My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8

Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieclapplz: Prank: [link]

:iconrainbowdashderpplz: Rainbow Highway: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]

:iconfluttercryplz:Home Alone: [link]
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Okay, being an animator myself... I could say this is very well done!

Congratulations! Also, being the animator of ERR. I'm quite busy so I declined their offer but it's fine.

Now, for some constructive criticism.
Vision of FULL STARS! :star::star::star::star::star:
You got your result and got what you wanted. Nice work, really. Nothing else I could say here.

3 Star Originality :star::star::star:
Well, on this one... I had to give a three. It was funny and all but I think of how would Applebloom aim and survive the landing. Still it's cartoons so it's fine. On the other hand, Luna on the moon... Reminds me of this line... "SO MANY FRIENDS"
I think it got overused or something.

Technically speaking:star::star::star::star:
It's good all and all but you really have to re-vector those mouths. It looks to sharp on this situation. On the other hand, try preventing some errors like her arm going to her head or the outline of the arm getting out of the body. Make sure that it looks like really attached to her arm. Check out =Ganton3. Try asking tips from him, he's a good animator.

Good for Webisodes:star::star::star::star:
Well, congrats! You earn yourself a good start! Enough even start a webisode. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be as fast in animating as those studio animators, including me! (But I'm off my work right now since I haven't got called.)

Well done and congrats! Anyways, good luck improving! ^^

:iconjohnkapid:=johnkapid
A friendly good critic for animators who are still beginning to start!
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I love this series, but one thing bothered me about this particular installment Apple Jack is a little....fat...^^; especially the part where she is pointing up at the light and there is that kinda front angle view.

Apart from that the only other thing I can say is that your Ponies are a little rough around the edges in places. Apple Jack's Flank for example when she is in the moon, comes to a small point in the back instead of a rounded surface. This can be seen in small areas through out the animations, you just need to smooth out your Ponies, and give them curves consistently throughout the body line...also I think Big Mac is supposed to have freckles too..

Please Keep this series going though XD its Hilarious
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OtakuDanny Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Professional General Artist
Good ol' Applebloom! ^_^
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Krashface Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cave johnson aprove.
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Wolfthewerehog Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Omg
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Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I want a portal gun o-o I'd make myself fly and go infinitely between portals like in Best Sisters play portal xD
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MistWings Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought I would see Wheatley and Space Core for a second! XD
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thunder86 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
:iconspacecoreplz::iconsaysplz:SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!
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Wolfthewerehog Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Lol
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alantian Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
danng apple jack got fat
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Kheelaia Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahaha, the sims music theme xD
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3dav3 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
I think that Apple Bloom end up much worse than Apple Jack...
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