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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:And thus my Aperture Science Handheld Portal Device has gone commercial in Equestria! With only 60 bits, you can have one. And it seems that Applebloom managed to get her hands on one using her spare pocket money, and still get a jar of Conversion gel too! Will she be using it for the good cause? I'm watching you Applebloom, use that thing wisely!

Twi got herself a break :iconcrazytwilightplz:. She's still in hospital trying to free herself out of that mailbox :XD:

I decided to take a leap forward by putting a minute long short. Too bad this doesn't look very good to me personally...

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

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Somehow I felt being something of a failure, with very little improvement going on since starting this portal series... :( Can't blame it on anyone but myself, seems like the glass ceiling is a little harder than she used to be...

Enough with the ranting. We'll be playing with more colourful gels the next "thinking with portals!" By the way, if you guys have any ideas, I'm welcome to hearing it.

Wait... shall I go with Rainbow Dash on her journey home, or shall I go with Twilight whose eager for some retribution?

Music is "The Sims 3 Pets" [link]


My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8

Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieclapplz: Prank: [link]

:iconrainbowdashderpplz: Rainbow Highway: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]

:iconfluttercryplz:Home Alone: [link]
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:iconjohnkapid:
Okay, being an animator myself... I could say this is very well done!

Congratulations! Also, being the animator of ERR. I'm quite busy so I declined their offer but it's fine.

Now, for some constructive criticism.
Vision of FULL STARS! :star::star::star::star::star:
You got your result and got what you wanted. Nice work, really. Nothing else I could say here.

3 Star Originality :star::star::star:
Well, on this one... I had to give a three. It was funny and all but I think of how would Applebloom aim and survive the landing. Still it's cartoons so it's fine. On the other hand, Luna on the moon... Reminds me of this line... "SO MANY FRIENDS"
I think it got overused or something.

Technically speaking:star::star::star::star:
It's good all and all but you really have to re-vector those mouths. It looks to sharp on this situation. On the other hand, try preventing some errors like her arm going to her head or the outline of the arm getting out of the body. Make sure that it looks like really attached to her arm. Check out =Ganton3. Try asking tips from him, he's a good animator.

Good for Webisodes:star::star::star::star:
Well, congrats! You earn yourself a good start! Enough even start a webisode. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be as fast in animating as those studio animators, including me! (But I'm off my work right now since I haven't got called.)

Well done and congrats! Anyways, good luck improving! ^^

:iconjohnkapid:=johnkapid
A friendly good critic for animators who are still beginning to start!
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I love this series, but one thing bothered me about this particular installment Apple Jack is a little....fat...^^; especially the part where she is pointing up at the light and there is that kinda front angle view.

Apart from that the only other thing I can say is that your Ponies are a little rough around the edges in places. Apple Jack's Flank for example when she is in the moon, comes to a small point in the back instead of a rounded surface. This can be seen in small areas through out the animations, you just need to smooth out your Ponies, and give them curves consistently throughout the body line...also I think Big Mac is supposed to have freckles too..

Please Keep this series going though XD its Hilarious
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:iconotakudanny:
OtakuDanny Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Good ol' Applebloom! ^_^
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:iconkrashface:
Krashface Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cave johnson aprove.
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:iconwolfthewerehog:
Wolfthewerehog Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Omg
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:iconlost-our-dreams:
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I want a portal gun o-o I'd make myself fly and go infinitely between portals like in Best Sisters play portal xD
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:iconmistwings:
MistWings Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought I would see Wheatley and Space Core for a second! XD
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:iconthunder86:
thunder86 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
:iconspacecoreplz::iconsaysplz:SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!
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:iconwolfthewerehog:
Wolfthewerehog Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Lol
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:iconalantian:
alantian Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
danng apple jack got fat
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:iconkheelaia:
Kheelaia Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahaha, the sims music theme xD
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:icon3dav3:
3dav3 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
I think that Apple Bloom end up much worse than Apple Jack...
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:iconruaken:
Ruaken Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
This is, I think, the funniest of this set of animations...
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:icongt4tube:
GT4tube Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
xD
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:iconlokifoxx:
Lokifoxx Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol
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:iconponyportal:
PonyPortal Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PORTAL!!!!
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:iconskytheloxables:
skytheloxables Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TO THE MOON
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:iconshadowstar1206:
Shadowstar1206 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Luna: HOW THE BUCK DID YOU GET HERE
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:iconhungryscorpion:
HungryScorpion Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Maybe they thought with Portals a little too much.
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:iconelrunion136:
elrunion136 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Sounds like a sims song.
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:iconpinktroll:
PinkTroll Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
I have a question....
Did you draw the animation yourself, or sort-of used images and adoif jasdifjasdfo??
Just wondering :)
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:iconpixelpal1131:
PixelPal1131 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Artist
He animated.
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:iconpinktroll:
PinkTroll Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
k
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:icon99fluffball:
99fluffball Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Luna: what is the matter with you?
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:icondaybydawn:
DayByDawn Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Is that sim music in the background? :O
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:icondowlphin:
Dowlphin Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The demeanor of the characters seems a bit unnatural and wooden at times, but the whole idea, the script, is hilarious.
Music choice is maybe not the best for the scene, at least not for the first part. As soon as Apple Bloom works on the solution, it's fine.
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:iconderpalicious39:
derpalicious39 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Sims background music?
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:iconshadowgrimer:
Shadowgrimer Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Overdrive AB style XD
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:iconflippysgirl20:
flippysgirl20 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student Artist
LOL sims song
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:iconrainbowdashfan4ever:
RainbowDashFan4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
:iconapplejackclapplz: I like it!
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:iconhogbroom:
Hogbroom Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And thus, the sonic Jackboom was born.
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:iconajb104:
Ajb104 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
TO THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNN
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:iconditzykitty91:
Ditzykitty91 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
this was very well done
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:iconthepoketrix:
ThePoketrix Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oops...XD
Maybe the portal should've been closer to the lightbulb, so they could just reach through the portal, and change the lightbulb.
Careful to tie yourself down, though!
+fav
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:iconcloudyjw:
CloudyJW Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
:icontwilightclapplz:
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:iconsparkytheunicorn:
SparkytheUnicorn Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Apparently ponies can breathe in space
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:icon2003delaneyrae:
2003Delaneyrae Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Omg... funny :3
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:iconwalrusbimbipbop:
walrusbimbipbop Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
what that background music from the sims games
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:iconsavercat:
SaverCat Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Artist
i love it , its almost like the real MLP animation!
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:iconnightomist:
NightoMist Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
holy.... that had to kill AppleBloom D :
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:iconmosspath48:
Mosspath48 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should do Twilight getting revenge next XD
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:iconsumyq:
sumyq Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
haha mare in the moon would check on the moon
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:iconmosspath48:
Mosspath48 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anyone else here the "YOU GOT THE THING!!!" noise?
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:iconderickramzess:
derickramzess Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Artist
TO DA MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
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:iconjohn123253:
john123253 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
yay!great job!
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:iconluigicat11:
Luigicat11 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
LOL dose eyes!:iconapplejackisdizzyplz:
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:iconlbelmont:
Lbelmont Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
i think applebloom used a little too much momentum.
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:iconchrismilesprower:
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
LOL. That's gotta hurt for Big Mac.
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:iconpilot231:
Pilot231 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Writer
ouch... poor AJ.
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:iconbluetruebrazilfilly:
BlueTrueBrazilFilly Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the sims' music...
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:iconpeace-love-zorua:
Peace-Love-Zorua Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Luna: What is the matter with you?!?!

Made me laugh so hard XD
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:iconajb104:
Ajb104 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
AJ said that
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