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![cavejohnsonplz :iconcavejohnsonplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/a/cavejohnsonplz.png?1)
![saysplz :iconsaysplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/a/saysplz.gif)
Twi got herself a break
![CrazyTwilightplz :iconcrazytwilightplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/r/crazytwilightplz.png?2)
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I decided to take a leap forward by putting a minute long short. Too bad this doesn't look very good to me personally...
Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.
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Somehow I felt being something of a failure, with very little improvement going on since starting this portal series...
![:( (Sad) :(](https://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/frown.gif)
Enough with the ranting. We'll be playing with more colourful gels the next "thinking with portals!" By the way, if you guys have any ideas, I'm welcome to hearing it.
Wait... shall I go with Rainbow Dash on her journey home, or shall I go with Twilight whose eager for some retribution?
Music is "The Sims 3 Pets" [link]
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve
Program used: Macromedia Flash 8
Other thinking with portals:
![derpynoesplz :iconderpynoesplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/e/derpynoesplz.png?1)
![PinkieClapPlz :iconpinkieclapplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/i/pinkieclapplz.gif?1)
![rainbowdashderpplz :iconrainbowdashderpplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/a/rainbowdashderpplz.png?1)
![sarcasticlunaplz :iconsarcasticlunaplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/a/sarcasticlunaplz.jpg?2)
![celestiaunamusedplz :iconcelestiaunamusedplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/e/celestiaunamusedplz.jpg?1)
![cavejohnsonplz :iconcavejohnsonplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/a/cavejohnsonplz.png?1)
![CarolinePortalPlz :iconcarolineportalplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/a/carolineportalplz.jpg?1)
![Fluttercryplz :iconfluttercryplz:](https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/l/fluttercryplz.png?1)
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Ok heres my first critique. so here we go:
First of all, i absolutely love the idea. ponies + portal = awesome. so for vision id say 4.5. as for originallity, 5. i havn't seen anything like this. technique, ive seen better (not from me i assure you) but ive seen ALOT worse (god only knows what ive seen). so for that, 4.
i'd like to also add that i like the way you didn't make the ponies talk. i mean, it would have been cool but you couldnt find the right voice or god forbid voice yourself (iveseenbadthings)
Overall, 4.5 outta 5.