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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Wha... Where're those Gels?!? They've gone missing by the barrels!!!
:iconcarolineportalplz::iconsaysplz:Mr. Johnson, Rainbow Dash just ordered them; dozens of barrels of gels. I'm not sure what she's going to do with them but...
:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Hahahahaha! That girl, always on the move. That's what I like! Deliver the gels to her house this instant. I'd love to see what she'll be using with those! Perhaps we can even see a Land Based Sonic Rainboom!

This one is aimed to practice more on fast paced animation as well as hair dynamics. I don't know if I got them right, but let's see about that...

By the way, I need to hire a repairman after Twilight broke my laptop screen... Those things cost quite a fortune you know?!?

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

Once again, I wish to give credit to :iconsprybug: who had taught me all the newer techniques that allow me to create better animations (not to mention easier too!) And of course all of you guys who have kindly gave me feedback and critiques; it goes a lot into improving!

Next up on the list would be most likely the Alicorn sisters as they try to outwit each other and lock themselves in a deadly game of Portal Combat. Featuring Pony Cave Johnson!

Music is "Rainbow Road" and its variation: [link]

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8

Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieismindfckedplz: Prank: [link]

:iconapplejacknoesplz::iconapplebloomplz::iconeeyupplz: Maintenance: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]

:iconfluttercryplz:Home Alone: [link]
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Definitely an enjoyable watch as you could see the deviousness in Rainbow Dash's mind from the beginning. The animation was very fluidic providing a smooth feel to the movie. Some movies i've seen don't have a good transition from scene to scene while this one alleviated that problem.

As for the story it seems predictable, but the part with her going off the ramp full blast into her home was funny. Truthfully I liked the part that she didn't just slam into the cloud wall, instead she crashed right through it onto her bed. Also found the ending to be enjoyable with our lovable derpy delivering some bad news to Rainbow that she owes quite a bit of...well bits for her stunts.

Well done OP and I can't wait to see your Celestia vs Luna animation. I await with great anticipation for that little number. :D
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My 4th critique in your hilarious pony portal animations.

I had to watch a few times like with the other portal animations but this time it took me a few replays before I noticed you used Rainbow Road music from Mario Kart games. :XD:

You made Dashie badass looking. (like she isnt ever not badass lol)

The parts that stood out the most were poor Twilight smashing the screen, which startled me on first time I watched this rofl and other one was where Dashie slams into her house and breaks through wall. (not fourth wall, but i wish >.<) It makes me think what was the point of her breaking her own wall on house even though I laughed semi-hard.

Also I noticed that you did same procedure with Derpy Hooves like in episode 2 but it was basically skipped this time cause it was obvious that it was Dashie's time to shine :XD: but where the heck did she get another portal gun since her other one was tossed in the hole she made in episode 2?

The time for reading the bill was a little too short, i had to screenshot it and read it that way. The music was fitting for each scene and it made me feel like I was watching Mario Kart pony style cause of the proper music.

Review done but as a bonus thing to mention, why is Twilight badly hurt in each episode, she's too "adorkable" (except episode 3 with apple family) and it seems strange why Dashie didn't think it through about the price for all that stuff before she got it all. Personally, even though Dashie is my favorite now, I think this is the best one its epic and badass and it had 2 themes (Portals obviously and Mario Kart) instead of one, which the others had. There will always be minor flaws but it doesnt really matter to most of us, just there to help out with improvements. Keep up epic work!
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gummy10020 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
poor twilight :/
flower2563 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist
SnowflakeThePony337 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i just love the way you animate.....
AmichanAmesan Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
poor twilight
HeartinaThePony Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
casualartist89 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Artist
amazing great animation you have skills
derpyhoovemuffins Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Lol Heart  it!!! irainbowdash :rainbowdash: 
sufk1331 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
:rainbowdash: Rainbow awesome lick Rainbow Dash Licking gif Waving Sparks 
sufk1331 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Beats (free avatar) Heart free avatar Heart - Free Heart Love Frozen - HUG! Pinkie sad pinkamena icon 
Rarity672 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was awesome!
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