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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Wha... Where're those Gels?!? They've gone missing by the barrels!!!
:iconcarolineportalplz::iconsaysplz:Mr. Johnson, Rainbow Dash just ordered them; dozens of barrels of gels. I'm not sure what she's going to do with them but...
:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Hahahahaha! That girl, always on the move. That's what I like! Deliver the gels to her house this instant. I'd love to see what she'll be using with those! Perhaps we can even see a Land Based Sonic Rainboom!

This one is aimed to practice more on fast paced animation as well as hair dynamics. I don't know if I got them right, but let's see about that...

By the way, I need to hire a repairman after Twilight broke my laptop screen... Those things cost quite a fortune you know?!?

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

Once again, I wish to give credit to :iconsprybug: who had taught me all the newer techniques that allow me to create better animations (not to mention easier too!) And of course all of you guys who have kindly gave me feedback and critiques; it goes a lot into improving!

Next up on the list would be most likely the Alicorn sisters as they try to outwit each other and lock themselves in a deadly game of Portal Combat. Featuring Pony Cave Johnson!
:icontrollestiaplz:VS:iconsarcasticlunaplz:

Music is "Rainbow Road" and its variation: [link]

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8


Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieismindfckedplz: Prank: [link]

:iconapplejacknoesplz::iconapplebloomplz::iconeeyupplz: Maintenance: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]

:iconfluttercryplz:Home Alone: [link]
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:iconamana07:
Definitely an enjoyable watch as you could see the deviousness in Rainbow Dash's mind from the beginning. The animation was very fluidic providing a smooth feel to the movie. Some movies i've seen don't have a good transition from scene to scene while this one alleviated that problem.

As for the story it seems predictable, but the part with her going off the ramp full blast into her home was funny. Truthfully I liked the part that she didn't just slam into the cloud wall, instead she crashed right through it onto her bed. Also found the ending to be enjoyable with our lovable derpy delivering some bad news to Rainbow that she owes quite a bit of...well bits for her stunts.

Well done OP and I can't wait to see your Celestia vs Luna animation. I await with great anticipation for that little number. :D
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:iconw0nderbolts:
My 4th critique in your hilarious pony portal animations.

I had to watch a few times like with the other portal animations but this time it took me a few replays before I noticed you used Rainbow Road music from Mario Kart games. :XD:

You made Dashie badass looking. (like she isnt ever not badass lol)

The parts that stood out the most were poor Twilight smashing the screen, which startled me on first time I watched this rofl and other one was where Dashie slams into her house and breaks through wall. (not fourth wall, but i wish >.<) It makes me think what was the point of her breaking her own wall on house even though I laughed semi-hard.

Also I noticed that you did same procedure with Derpy Hooves like in episode 2 but it was basically skipped this time cause it was obvious that it was Dashie's time to shine :XD: but where the heck did she get another portal gun since her other one was tossed in the hole she made in episode 2?

The time for reading the bill was a little too short, i had to screenshot it and read it that way. The music was fitting for each scene and it made me feel like I was watching Mario Kart pony style cause of the proper music.

Review done but as a bonus thing to mention, why is Twilight badly hurt in each episode, she's too "adorkable" (except episode 3 with apple family) and it seems strange why Dashie didn't think it through about the price for all that stuff before she got it all. Personally, even though Dashie is my favorite now, I think this is the best one its epic and badass and it had 2 themes (Portals obviously and Mario Kart) instead of one, which the others had. There will always be minor flaws but it doesnt really matter to most of us, just there to help out with improvements. Keep up epic work!
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:iconlavadagger:
LavaDagger Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  New member
That must've been fun! (For Rainbow Dash, I mean)
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:iconcookiestarisakitty:
Cookiestarisakitty Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Professional Filmographer
dat rainbow road music..
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:iconfluttershylover20:
fluttershylover20 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Why was Twilight in a wheel chair? LOL!!!
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:iconswagmidnightblossom:
SwagMidNightBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
heh lol twilight
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:iconraerae2234:
Raerae2234 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
that was coolHeart +fav OMG! I can't contain my excitement! 
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:icongummy10020:
gummy10020 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
poor twilight :/
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:iconflower2563:
flower2563 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist
EPIC!
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:iconsnowflakethepony337:
SnowflakeThePony337 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i just love the way you animate.....
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:iconamichanamesan:
AmichanAmesan Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
poor twilight
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:iconheartinathepony:
HeartinaThePony Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow!
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:iconcasualartist89:
casualartist89 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Artist
amazing great animation you have skills
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:iconderpyhoovemuffins:
derpyhoovemuffins Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Lol Heart  it!!! irainbowdash :rainbowdash: 
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:iconsufk1331:
sufk1331 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
:rainbowdash: Rainbow awesome lick Rainbow Dash Licking gif Waving Sparks 
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:iconsufk1331:
sufk1331 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Beats (free avatar) Heart free avatar Heart - Free Heart Love Frozen - HUG! Pinkie sad pinkamena icon 
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:iconrarity672:
Rarity672 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was awesome!
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:iconlost-our-dreams:
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
EPIIICCC
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:iconenderman699:
Enderman699 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Professional Artist
Rainbow Dash launched away Twilight Sparkle.
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:iconshadegirl787:
shadegirl787 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
if rd can do it every pony can
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:iconshadegirl787:
shadegirl787 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
its all unfair 
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:iconlarwolf:
Larwolf Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Twilight! NO!!
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:icongt4tube:
GT4tube Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol twilight wtf xd
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rainbowdashie12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
15, 2013 New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
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hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
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she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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:iconpattinaggio:
Pattinaggio Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
wow it's awesome!! Pinkie Pie Scream01 
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:iconmr15theminecrafter:
mr15theminecrafter Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
damn that is the third screen replacement this year
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:iconpandacorn6:
Pandacorn6 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gr8 animation! hilarious!
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:iconr4lnb0w:
R4lNB0W Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow now you can run as fast as you can fly
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:icontclego:
tclego Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see what you did there with the Rainbow Road theme.... :D
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:iconrnoonpies:
rnoonpies Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ahahaha!
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:iconprincesscadence345:
Princesscadence345 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Professional Artist
lol dang rd
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:icondovethekitty:
dovethekitty Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now she has to pay for all those gels, AND a broken wall! She could of just used the portals to get in...
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:icondragonlover1234567:
dragonlover1234567 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol amazing
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:icontesla51:
Tesla51 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight just can't catch a break!

Well, Rainbow Dash, that is the price you pay for a 30 second thrill.
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:iconthesnakerox:
Thesnakerox Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dash certainly did do a good job of turning into the Thrust SSC!
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:iconhalofandude123:
halofandude123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor twi
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:icondaughter-of-wolves:
Daughter-Of-Wolves Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love! The ending was hilarious!
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:iconmiisan:
MiiSan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
HOLY SHIT that sims music at the end D=
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:icondragonturtle2:
DragonTurtle2 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Something that seemed weird to me throughout is that Rainbow Dash was actually running on the gel. Even if someone could get some traction on it, the animation itself just looked odd to me.
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:icon2003delaneyrae:
2003Delaneyrae Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Dat bill.... :0
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:iconwafflez-of-equestria:
Wafflez-of-Equestria Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nice usage of the rainbow road music.
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:icongoldendog360:
goldendog360 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
ok now thats way over 9000% cooler
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:iconaithusa308:
Aithusa308 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AAhh poratl a great game
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:iconp3g4s1st3r:
p3g4s1st3r Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
welp, there goes the 4th wall!
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:iconcapttain:
capttain Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Cool!
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:iconlavendermongoose:
LavenderMongoose Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Yay! Sonic runboom!
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:iconmosspath48:
Mosspath48 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The Rainbow Road music fit quite well ^^
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:iconcolor-clouds:
Color-Clouds Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Poor Twilight, she keeps on getting even more injured each episode.
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:iconxxiceblastofrcxx:
xXIceblastofRCXx Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Poor Twilight XDDD
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:iconsrimbalo:
Srimbalo Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
how can she do a sonic rainboom galloping?
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:iconeonorteashadowmaster:
EonOrteaShadowmaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
Well, there goes the fourth wall...
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:iconfireball968:
Fireball968 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
POOR TWILIGHT
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