Temporal Shift, Prologue Page 1
And the power to travel through time has been given...
But...
What did you seek from it?
In that sense, what do you want from time?Temporal shift is a Happy Tree Friends Fan Comic with an emphasis on time travel. The story will put a heavy focus on Cuddles and also told from Cuddles' point of view. The story will have a mainly dark, although sometimes hilarious tone.
This first and second page serves as the pilot page that will drive the story forward. Be warned as there will be many scientific references in the story. For example, Lorentz coils refers to the Railgun, which utilises the Lorentz force to direct a projectile.
It will be a bit complicated at first
As some pages needs a little inferring to understand.
The story opens up with Sniffles attempting to time travel by opening a portal using his chrono shift device. What happens next? I leave to your imagination, as well as the upcoming page 2, soon to be finished.
P.S. I was wishing that I could put this page as page -6 (negative 6), or probably put the chapter not in order (as the chronology will go back and forth). If that is so, this would be chapter II (Oh, Spoilers! Dammit) But seeing how it might be hard to understand, I decide to stick with the normal way.
Ferdinand? Whose Ferdinand? TS will also include a fanmade character full name. In this case, Ferdinand Flippy Fitzgerald (his name might be a bit German, but I've checked it out, it fits him)
Temporal Shift (C)
Happy Tree Friends (C) Mondo Media
Prologue Page 2 (next page)
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The wonders of Science, I do agree with sniffles that Time Travel could be possible.
I've been longing for Science-Fiction or Science Related Comics for a long time, I've only seen a few.
Thanks a lot!
What did you use to do this, Adobe? Corel? Flash? Gimp? Sai?
Their characteristics are truly stunning, fits them greatly.
But how about a little bit of the background?
Keep it up, or if you don't continue this wonderful Science-Fiction, I'll start a rant on your profile.
This is hand-drawn, combined with adobe Photoshop CS5. Fun combination! But as I don't have a scanner to upload the drawing to Photoshop, I have to improvise... With low resolution camera phones
More background story will be revealed in chapter I.
Will do ma'am!
How unpleasant.
What I like about it is the science-y theme to it and the designs of the equipment. The plot looks very intriguing and the characters have their own personality and style of dialogue.
But what you might want to try is setting Sniffles's mouth a little bit farther back in relation to his nose. In the final column he is kinda like
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BBBBLLLLLAAAARRRRRRRGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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But with his mouth and not the gadget. (Harsh criticism is harsh) Maybe try setting his nose over his mouth a little bit, make it look a little bit more natural looking.
Back to the characters' personality, I love Flippy's dialect. Having him talk more similar to someone who lives in the Southeastern US fits his gritty military background better then most other works I've seen.
Just one question, how does firing metal slugs via electromagnetism fit into time travel? XD Maybe I am over-thinking it :derp:
Oh, its alright, go harsh on me if you think I really need it
After looking at Sniffles closely for the second time, it does seems he shoops da whoop
Flippy's dialect, kinda accidentally put it there actually
Well, when we're talking about railguns, we will be talking about the Lorentz force. Basically, The Lorentz force is the force acting on an object due to electromagnetic fields. Not only metal projectiles, but all particles come under the effect of the force. So that is part of the design, I was imagining that the portal opener is some kind of energy ball of charged particles (plasma) that gets directed with the use of the electromagnetic force, thus the railgun parallel (otherwise, it will just goes ballistic). Oh carp, I hope I'm not dumping too much science into you
I love what you did with effects, shadings, and Sniffles' line that said: Here goes nothing... No stepping back... now... Everything will be alright... Into the hands of fate!!! FOR SCIENCE!!!
Ah, those lines had made my... night? lol!
Hehehehe, you love his line? Talking about him being a wise scientist, I decided to add a little wiseness to him, I hope it fits him well. For me personally, I really love the Into the hands of fate quote
Thank you